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引用第3楼柔风吹过于2009-11-19 12:36发表的 :石大哥用优美的语言,清新的笔调,勾画出一幅生机勃勃的冬雪图。全篇自始至终都洋溢着对“雪”的喜悦之情,特别是结尾一句“我的心却告诉我,那只是一个躯体! 她的心早给了春天的土地!”,即升华了主题,又照应了文题,使诗作前后呼应,一气呵成,读后令人耳目一新。柔风欣赏之!
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